English translation by VSARPJ from Peter Sells "On null pronouns in Old Japanese (上代日本語のゼロ代名詞)" :
“How touching, when you look at (it), is the moon that shines dimly when the jewel-black night mist rises.”

English translation by VSARPJ from PRESENTATION: PROVISIONAL AND CONDITIONAL CLAUSES IN OLD JAPANESE :
‘How touching, when you look at it, is the moon that shines dimly when the mist of the jewel-black night rises.’

English translation by VSARPJ from Bjarke Frellesvig, Stephen W Horn, Kerri L Russell, and Peter Sells "Provisional and Conditional Clauses in Old Japanese":
‘How touching, when you look at (it), is the moon that shines dimly when the jewel-black night mist rises.’